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Hi Matt - love it. vivid and consistent, giving the poem a clear emotional architecture without ever feeling gimmicky. The “raining on the inside” and “desert within him” stanzas in particular do a great job of turning abstract feelings into physical sensations... seems like you always capture natural feelings with your beautiful words. - happy holidays, Andrea

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