The Weather Man
Raining on the inside
The Weather Man
The pre-dawn dreams had returned tortuous, ponderous wandering plays at once the old house and not the old house its vibrant paint peeling away old wood ribs bared to the elements strange neighbor voyeurs looking on as he followed some lovers room by room the wild pull of shame to run the molasses resistance in his limbs the dream sense that he should stay that this and this alone was real He awoke raining on the inside not thunderous, a tedious rain pouring in pooling in his legs, rising to his lungs a sluggish and melancholy rain wishing for sun and one day later his wish granted in some other dream fickle and surreal, familiar faces betrayed He awoke to a desert within him prickly and dry, needling, searing when he moved, his joints surged electric the scraggle of stinging sensations a sighing sweep of heat, grit grinding between his teeth and in his veins today as a desert he’d weep if he had any tears what he had was longing for murky dreams his sense for the weather, a hard memory
The rain gave way to snow. We’ve had two weekends in a row of silent Saturday snowfalls, both beautiful. I managed to get the noisy snowblower going both Sunday mornings to get it out of the way and venture out for me Sunday routines, which usually includes writing more poetry. Soon my kids will come home for Christmas visits and softer memories. We’ll have Mexican food and hot chocolate and pan-seared steak and more movie line quotes than we should and a required dose of George Bailey getting the right kind of rich. I’ve already got another poem for you for next time. Please keep your likes and comments coming. They always warm me up.




Hi Matt - love it. vivid and consistent, giving the poem a clear emotional architecture without ever feeling gimmicky. The “raining on the inside” and “desert within him” stanzas in particular do a great job of turning abstract feelings into physical sensations... seems like you always capture natural feelings with your beautiful words. - happy holidays, Andrea