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It's mysterious, but the beautiful imagery entices you to unravel it. It's a neat poem, Mathew! I'll be thinking about it for a while

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Thank you, Brandon. Think away, please!

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May 8Liked by Mathew Snyder

Loved this poem too. The imagery is effective and made me land right there.

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Possibly my favorite of what I've read of yours so far! (I might've forgotten something equally great, but in any case this is right up there.)

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Thanks, man! So glad to hear that.

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"Grackles, Demented, Troubadours, Petrichor, Fulgerite"... these are great words, and they give so much to the feel of it all... Love it

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Thanks David! I’ve really been working on distinct voice the last few months, so that’s gratifying to hear.

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A perfect poem for the full moon in Scorpio.

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I'll take your word for it, good luck and all. Thanks! :)

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Very good, I yesterday wrote a poem, doomsday and myth

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Thanks, Janoskar!

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Haunted, gorgeous imagery - but mostly agonizingly beautiful.

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Your comments always lift me up, Patris. Thanks!

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