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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Got me good on this one, Mathew - Wow!

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

Thank you! This one took some doing.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

It paid off, Mathew - I think this is one of the best of yours I've read!

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Malcolm J McKinney's avatar

You have exposed the light at the rear of the tunnel.

My comment.

Fire

We all end in a fire, some

Final blaze of glory

Enflamed lung

Raging tumor

Sparks of an ember

Crematory?

End of story

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

Thanks, Malcolm! And well done.

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Malcolm J McKinney's avatar

Thanks Matthew. I have noted before that trading comments I what I like best about Substack.

Be well.

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Lizzy Co (she/they)'s avatar

This is a Very Good Poem.🤘

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

Thanks, Lizzy. I'm honored.

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Susan-Jane Harrison's avatar

Marvelous. So satisfying.

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Patris's avatar

Inspired, very moving. The futility of hope for happiness, no matter the passion for one another that consumes these lovers.

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

Patris, thanks so much! I'm so glad it connected.

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Mark L's avatar

Carumba That's a Deep Poem

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

Thanks, Mark. Greatly appreciate that.

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Kevin Maher's avatar

‘I’ll burn the books, for warmth more than light’ is an outstanding line in an outstanding piece. Many thanks for sharing.

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

Thanks for reading and the kind words, Kevin.

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