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Oh my God have you hit the nail squarely on this old guy's head !

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Apr 9Liked by Mathew Snyder

Love it. Big Lebowski vibes.

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Stay out of Malibu!

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Apr 15Liked by Mathew Snyder

Nice poem. No matter what, the ripple of our existence will be in the time fabric memory of the universe forever.

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Thanks, Rick!

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Ha! I absolutely love the attitude in this.

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Glad to hear that!

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Apr 10Liked by Mathew Snyder

Defiance in death. You get the final say here. So good.

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Thank you, Patris!

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Nice piece!

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Thanks!

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I could be that somehow I got lost in the poem, but I could not see what those two vices are. The poem is not a bad one. But I am in need of some help to get all that this writing has to offer. I feel that there is much more here that what I am able to see.

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It’s a reference to the whiskey and pencils line, one “bad” and one “good.”

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